
This keeps the #9 slowdown idea but ties it to the stronger #12 payoff.
The set keeps the words out of the way. The cover gets a man started, and the numbered turn gives him a reason to slow down instead of swiping past.
Photo #9 should feel better after the viewer knows where the set is going.










The set is built for a slow look. Some photos work right away. Others are better the second time through.